i_speak_softly: (This is my grim and serious look.)
i_speak_softly ([personal profile] i_speak_softly) wrote2010-03-12 08:52 pm

Fourth Theory [Voice]

((Backdated to before Michelangelo was returned.))

Filtered to Raine Sage || Pretty Damn Unhackable

Miss Sage, I finished the blueprints for the playground.



I'm afraid I'm not much for technical drawing. I build from visualization, though, so it will come out all right. Here -

((And ahaha mun cannot draw at all, so pretend this looks more like what he's about to describe.))



[It's a... strangely militaristic-looking playground. When Don started designing it, his goal had been to make it fun but safe. Then his brother got kidnapped. Suddenly, safety was paramount, and in the blueprints he drew fun seems almost like an afterthought. He'll explain:]

I managed to squeeze in just about everything the kids asked for. All the play structures, not counting the hide-and-seek area, are in a thirty-meter radius. A further fifty meters outside that is the defensive perimeter. If the perimeter is breached, the missiles will arm automatically. They're free-mounted for maximum coverage and counterpositioned so there are no blindspots; the overrides are in the lookout tower. Also on perimeter breach, the playfort will convert automatically to defensive configuration. It will hold fifty children, more at a squeeze, and there's a supply chamber underneath - fully stocked it will sustain the compound for three weeks. The person in the lookout tower will be able to climb directly down into the school building, and I have some preliminary sketches of how security there can be tightened.

[He stops to breathe.]

What do you think?
wise_maiden: (one more look at the ghost)

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[personal profile] wise_maiden 2010-03-13 04:47 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, you've finished already? I'll take a look.
wise_maiden: (and others i have broken)

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[personal profile] wise_maiden 2010-03-13 04:50 am (UTC)(link)
[......]
wise_maiden: (sometimes you just can't win)

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[personal profile] wise_maiden 2010-03-13 04:53 am (UTC)(link)
[... Well. Hmm. Where to even start?]
wise_maiden: (how many lemons should i add)

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[personal profile] wise_maiden 2010-03-13 04:54 am (UTC)(link)
... Well. That's... certainly ambitious.
wise_maiden: (and the fire fades away)

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[personal profile] wise_maiden 2010-03-13 04:53 pm (UTC)(link)
... Well. Your heart's in the right place for it, anyway. Though with that kind of planning, I can think of other endeavors that might benefit from it. But... it is a bit too extreme for an ordinary playground.

There are other things to keep in mind as well, such as the availability of materials.
wise_maiden: (waiting to change)

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[personal profile] wise_maiden 2010-03-14 04:25 pm (UTC)(link)
That may have been best. [...] I should also warn about another matter which may complicate this - which involves using wood from the forest, as well. There is a giant wolf who resides within the forest and considers herself it's guardian. I believe she attacks anyone who she perceives as doing harm to the trees.

... All right. Good luck, Donatello.
wise_maiden: (always looking out)

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[personal profile] wise_maiden 2010-03-15 11:26 pm (UTC)(link)
She isn't an ordinary animal. Others have run into trouble with her.
wise_maiden: (can you tell me where i am)

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[personal profile] wise_maiden 2010-03-16 01:07 am (UTC)(link)
... I meant in the sense that she's considered a god in her world. But I apologize if there was any offense.
wise_maiden: (it won't let me in)

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[personal profile] wise_maiden 2010-03-16 01:19 am (UTC)(link)
... All right.

If there's anything else I can assist you with, feel free to let me know.