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i_speak_softly) wrote2010-04-25 04:17 pm
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Eleventh Theory [Action/Voice]
((For the duration of the experiment Don's thoughts will be in {curly brackets}, OH GOD SORRY FOR THE BRAINSPAM.))
[Today Donatello is wandering around the village center, enjoying the nice weather and generally exploring. Unbeknownst to him, he is being followed by a thought bubble.]
[As he passes the clinic, on his way to the fountain:]
{... disassociative delusions. Induction of kinesthetic misperception. She thought her arm was artificial, so far as to... I should go visit her.}
[And as he comes into view of the school, he opens his journal:]
Molly, the weather is getting warm... do you want to start building the playground soon?
[Today Donatello is wandering around the village center, enjoying the nice weather and generally exploring. Unbeknownst to him, he is being followed by a thought bubble.]
[As he passes the clinic, on his way to the fountain:]
{... disassociative delusions. Induction of kinesthetic misperception. She thought her arm was artificial, so far as to... I should go visit her.}
[And as he comes into view of the school, he opens his journal:]
Molly, the weather is getting warm... do you want to start building the playground soon?
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[He pulls out a chair and sits down.]
I can't always do it on purpose. But I'll try.
[He stares at the wall. In his thought bubble, the BattleShell. It rotates, the hood opens, the engine pops out. And, as Don's gaze unfocuses and his head tilts to the side, the engine 'explodes', the parts flying in all directions, the thought bubble expanding to contain them. The parts move around each other, each one a perfect three-dimensional replica of its real-life counterpart. Tiny formulas scrawl themselves in the air. And, in a way that's so smooth and gradual that you don't realize it's happening until it's almost finished, the parts reassemble themselves into a different, better kind of engine.]
[And Don stares at the wall.]
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As Don remains completely oblivious to reality.]
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So he decides to leave Don to his thoughts, starting the water for tea.]
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A whistle.
A whistle? No, the train's not going anywhere, it doesn't need a ...
... a whistle ...}
[The bubble shrinks, vacuuming itself up, returning to a little contained thing by Don's ear.]
[He blinks slowly at the tea kettle, as though examining a strange alien artifact. Finally:] Your water is boiling.
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Do you understand now, Raph? Why I do that?
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Do what? Zone out like that?
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Never mind.
{A waste.}
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Whoa, whoa, whoa, wait. What'd I do now?
I get it, okay? 'Scuse me for the bad word choice.
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{It doesn't matter.}
Is there enough water for another cup?
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Yeah.
[He takes a seat. You can get it yourself.]
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You still hate it.
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[Quietly:] We're both prisoners, aren't we.
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Don't say it like that.
[Though his thought bubble makes it obvious he has no idea why he shouldn't. It's at least half-true, isn't it? But it also makes them who they are. He wouldn't want to change that...or maybe he's not quite sure if he would. There are things he'd want to change about himself, but at the same time, that's what makes him who he is, and if he changed, it would be like losing a part of himself.
Above him, his thought bubble's cloud wordlessly argues with itself.]
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[Sips his tea thoughtfully.] I think this experiment has proved that there are certain kinds of freedom we wouldn't want.
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Whatever.
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Feeling any better?
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